Recently some office workers have begun to work from home instead of commuting to an office each day and this idea is growing in popularity What in your opinion are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend of working from home

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Recently, some office workers have begun to work from home instead of commuting to an office each day, and this idea is growing in popularity.
What, in your opinion, are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend of working from home?

While the covid-19 is spreading, almost companies have to allow staffs to work from home to run their business. After the pandemic, people debate whether companies should keep running work from home, and it is better than go to an office.

My opinion, we should apply work from home pattern to our companies. One signature of human is adaption, in the pandemic, we learned that work from home gives us flexible working time and places. It helps to save cost for running business, such as electric bills, office bills, parking,…; prevent spreading of some diseases, and save moving time to arrive to the office. People love to work from home because they feel comfortable at their home, the distance between enjoying life and working is closer, therefore, they could even finish job more efficient.

But we should do slowly, it is a new working style, we need time to learn and build a good management, some companies apply hybrid pattern first, staffs only need to go to office in 1-2 days a week, so they can learn challenges and resolve them. It requires staffs must have good responsibility, productivity and concentration when work remotely, because they could get distracted any time as result of flexibility. The top challenge is to keep good communication in team, the staff needs to handle their internet, quite place for meeting, camera, headphone,…

Eventually, working remotely is a trend now, everyone should try it and feel whether fits to their style, because more comfortable will bring more efficiency in job, we need to figure out the good way to work for ourselves. The companies should apply work from home slowly, to keep business running smoothly, and don’t get hurt because of hurry.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99651567944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65456752505 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.662476083 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.4 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258482914309 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127574726237 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562896600681 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172528544508 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704074697654 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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