Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them.
Which viewpoint do you take?
Since the appearance of humanity on the Earth, people have been thinking about taming wild animals. While some people claim that pets should be kept at home for children, others disagree with them. I am absolutely confident that cats and dogs can be kept in an apartment or house with kids.
In my opinion, owning a pet at home allows to develop useful human qualities that are necessary for any person in adult life. The formation of human behavior occurs from childhood, so the more they communicate with animals, the more friendly they will be. In addition, living together with them forms the skill of caring for those who cannot help themselves. For example, according to statistical studies of the Psychological Institute of Kazakhstan, the possibility of aggression in children who live with pets is 30% less than in others. Hence, keeping pets possesses a positive effect on the development of the child and their attitude to others.
Some opponents of the fact that pets are good for children may object to this, stating that animals can harm health. However veracious it sounds, I would not agree with the above mentioned idea since communication with animals reduces psychological stress. As a result of such interaction, calmness, poise and good mood appear. For instance, the daughter of my friend Praskovya, after a Labrador appeared in the house, became more joyful. Thus, the emotional state also depends on whether a beloved pet lives in the house.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that animals help children to form a friendly and attentive attitude towards people. They are the cause of the positive impact on the physical and psychological state of a child.
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Suggestion: developing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06028368794 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74101547546 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.580193127 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241391013073 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075134236992 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793029166912 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135309379928 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647849953812 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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