Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
What should have its place as the principal developmental aim of a nation is open to debate. Although economic improvement may, understandably, be the key marker of a country's success, I assume that it is not the sole factor to be able to play that crucial role.
Some believe that economic progress can contribute the most to the development of a country, which is acceptable for some specific reasons. Among them is that it can tackle the issue of unemployment, which is evident since a healthy economy can earn the power of job creation. Thus, the unemployment rate may experience a decline that is beneficial to society, leading to improved living standards as fewer people would live in reduced circumstances. In addition, economic progress can influence the image of a nation by creating a dynamic environment for technologies, inventions and foreign investments. A strong economy will allow new technologies and innovations to be integrated and applied, making the internal economy continue to flourish, and it can also help its country's standing on a global stage regarding political and trading influence so that there will be more international economic cooperation.
However, since economic progress would only reflect part of the material development of a country, I am in favour of the view that some other facets can equally contribute to its growth. Firstly, a nation's progress in social justice and equality, moral standards and citizens' intellectual level can also decide its level of attraction on the world stage regarding cultural and social development. Secondly, while judging a country's success, it is also vital to seriously consider its ability to ensure environmental sustainability and resilience. Thirdly, preserving national identity in the context of global socioeconomic integration is equally essential owing to creating a unique position for each country. Finally, putting a nation's economy at the heart of its success can be replaced by measuring that success by looking at its residents' health, well-being and happiness, as economic progress does not always affect the quality of life.
In conclusion, to measure the success of any particular country, economic growth can be one but not the sole and the most vital factor to be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...on for each country. Finally, putting a nations economy at the heart of its success can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31024930748 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1025301739 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542936288089 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4520394437 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.461538462 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133273743177 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541471447641 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528198400144 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751978283177 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385017856466 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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