men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Differentiating a task on basis of gender is a subjective and a complex matter. The statement states that due to inherent physical differences, men and women are not equally suited for different tasks. I do not agree with the statement that physical difference should be a hinderance for a gender to complete a task. Let me put forth a few factors to prove my stance:
Technology has seen no boundaries in last few decades, and it is becoming more and more advance day-by-day. With the help of technologies there is no task in the world which human-kind cannot achieve. Many years ago, a carrer in armed forces was considered a carrer for men due to their inbuilt physical strength and stamina, but now this is no more the case. We can see women on the field of operation of armed forces. With proper training and facility women can become equal to the men. In training technology has played a cruical role like for example, the armed forces are using different simulated technologies and environment to create a real life scenerios during the training.
The men and women are both treated equally in all the sectors. Women has started dominating the fields in which men us to dominate like, female truck drivers, cab drivers and pilots and many more. Now the society is not discriminating a job based on gender and proving both the gender with equal opportuinity. Now women are not behind men, but they walk abreast with men in all stages of life, whether it is carrer, or personal life. For instance, in sports there are many examples where a women athlete have won more medals then men. For example, PV Sindhu a Indian badminton player has won two medals in consecutive Olympics which no Indian badminton player has achieve it.
Not denying the fact that there are few task which only a specific gender can perform. For example, breast feeding a child could only be done by a mother. Caring and nature a child only a mother can do it. Women have evolved in such a way that they are more keen on hearing the srill and high pitch voice compare to men. This help them to wake up at night when baby cries.
In conclusion, though there are few specific task which a paticular gender could perform, but now with the help of modern technology, many task could be done by both the gender. The physical difference is not coming as a issue when women or men select a carrer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
... sports there are many examples where a women athlete have won more medals then men. ...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_NNS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'more medals than'?
Suggestion: more medals than
...examples where a women athlete have won more medals then men. For example, PV Sindhu a Indian ba...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...re a women athlete have won more medals then men. For example, PV Sindhu a Indian ba...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...medals then men. For example, PV Sindhu a Indian badminton player has won two med...
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Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...cs which no Indian badminton player has achieve it. Not denying the fact that there a...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'few tasks'.
Suggestion: few tasks
.... Not denying the fact that there are few task which only a specific gender can perfor...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...Not denying the fact that there are few task which only a specific gender can perfor...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...nclusion, though there are few specific task which a paticular gender could perform,...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...now with the help of modern technology, many task could be done by both the gender. The p...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he physical difference is not coming as a issue when women or men select a carrer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61229314421 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52946024009 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498817966903 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5605607815 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6818181818 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378439667912 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110205764022 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105894744376 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213467157736 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089672446789 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.