As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will
surely deteriorate
In the antiquities time you write a letter then move to post office to send it.This letter will post to your family member by post master.That system kills lot of times.But technology makes it more easier.By technology you can easily send a text to your family member at a short time.So I mostly disagree that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
By technology we can think on more and more complicated matters and solve these in a short time.Without it we cann't think or solve one single complicated matter.Without it we aren't able to solve the problem instantly.
By technology we can move easily all over the world.not only that but also we can travel in space now. In primeable time it was just a dream.Day by day fuels concentration over the world is going down.with technology we made a alternative way of fuels for running our transportation.
Overall, without technology we cann't make our life easily.By technology we can do many jobs in a time.That's why as people rely more and more on technology to solve problem.It does not mean that the bility of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85167464115 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92433364985 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 215.323595506 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.580632152 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.8 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 23.4991977007 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437712480989 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230068028625 0.0831039109588 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171866596573 0.0758088955206 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281093794911 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154693406361 0.0667264976115 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 48.8420337079 61% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.