Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people, like the homeless and unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays people think that the government should not spend money on international aid while the people are in trouble at home like the homeless and unemployed.
On the one hand, the country is facing economic difficulties. Therefore the government needs to come up with methods to support the people. First of all, the government creates job opportunities as well as housing support for people. Instead of donating money to poorer countries, the government should use the government budget to improve free social services such as health care and education. Second, when citizens can settle down, they will have the opportunity to work as well as help the country develop more economically.
On the other hand, the government can donate money to less developed countries that can create good relations between countries as well as can bring their own goods to import to their side to develop goods abroad. In addition, the government can lend money to less developed countries, if the countries cannot pay, they will have to obey. For example, the US has lent Ukraine a large amount of money but they can't pay it, so they can only obey the US until they can pay it back.
In short, the government needs to thoroughly solve its own problems before thinking about helping other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ountry is facing economic difficulties. Therefore the government needs to come up with me...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...kraine a large amount of money but they cant pay it, so they can only obey the US un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in short, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97685185185 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64068733388 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3486717619 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234771831209 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921558456491 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966078011746 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161974218203 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120204415557 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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