Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Due to advancement of modern sophisticated technology, people have reached to different planets into the Universe which created the heated arguments between the living entities. Some people believe that spending useful resources on space exploration is not necessary whereas others believe that it is important for the betterment of humankind. While I understand the positive and negative side of this debate, I believe both perspectives are important for progress.
Spending valuable resources on space is not essential, as there are several problems on earth which need to address first. First and foremost, reason is that some parts of the world still do not have basic amenities like water, health infrastructure, and so on. Due to less facilities in these countries, it would make people's life difficult as they do not have better surviving conditions. As a result, such countries will go into economic crisis or civil war to find suitable services. In addition, space exploration is new topic for the scientists because they do not have complete knowledge about universe.
On the contrary, others opine that it is necessary to explore universe because individual can gain abundance knowledge and surviving techniques from this research. To explain that mankind can benefit from space visit because with this significant information, they do research and may find weather conditions of different planets. If there is any possibility of suitable environment to live on, it would be better to move there. Moreover, we can learn the weather patterns of our planet through the satellites orbiting into space, which will be helpful for the threats coming to our planet.
To conclude, there are certain ups and downs for space exploration, however, in my opinion, it is necessary to focus on both sides because people also need some of the base requirements to live on this planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ealth infrastructure, and so on. Due to less facilities in these countries, it would...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... on both sides because people also need some of the base requirements to live on this plane...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29900332226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85111006454 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8496839366 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24374833044 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805949314323 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571345225481 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151554811497 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485082367647 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.