The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Career is always obviously crucial. It is commonly argued that doing one job is not up to date in this era. The new trend has been shifting nowadays in which others people believe that having various accoupations and gaining higher education are livelong advantageous. This issue will argue on both sides with relevant experiences and deeper understanding.
On the one hand, it is commonly viewed that abundance of people tend to improve career by doing side hustle to learn something new and work in others field. The more they gain knowledge the richer they are. For instance, most lecturers in my university are doing a freelance government consultant. On top of that, they maximalize their leisure time to take online classes for gaining new insights. As a result, their capacity is improved and they can produce more money. Thus, establishing career by having several occupations and improving self quality have been a trend lately.
On the other hand, people with one profession are always seen as conservative because they tend to ignore the trends that can help them to acquire more money. As a consequence, they tend to face financial stagnancy, or even worse, deal with financial issues. For instance, one of my neighbours started his career when he was 20 as a driver, then it continues for full-timer driver in his whole life. However, the money percentage he received is not always sufficient enough to pay his family bills from year to year. Therefore, surviving with one occupation is considered as traditional idea.
To conclude, there are several ways of earning money. In my opinion, I believe that doing various careers generate people to improve their wealth and capacity. This is as long as, people do not stuck in one profession and ignore the trends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...wealth and capacity. This is as long as, people do not stuck in one profession an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04054054054 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69315670587 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4923888564 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18838583436 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604901376355 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576004641025 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115248326445 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163327283093 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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