Global sales game sofwares, CDs, DVD
In 20th century and a decade of 21th century, games software, cds and dvd are popular in young people. these were used for entertainment. if you want to use, you must have a cds player and the price of it not cheap. Each sofwares or cds was saled $1, so, if it is your passion, the number of cds is too big. However, when technology development, cds are less popular, these are relatived by smart phone, game technological. if you want to listen some music, play games or anything make you relax, you just need your smart phone. Instead of buy a cds listen music of a singer and you just use in home due to cds player; nowadays , you can listen any songs of any singers you like anytime, anywhere. The sales of game software, cds, dvd lower , are not popular and even have a few places sale these.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ds and dvd are popular in young people. these were used for entertainment. if you wan...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ple. these were used for entertainment. if you want to use, you must have a cds pl...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ot cheap. Each sofwares or cds was saled , so, if it is your passion, the number o...
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Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ved by smart phone, game technological. if you want to listen some music, play gam...
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Line 1, column 626, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... use in home due to cds player; nowadays , you can listen any songs of any singers...
^^
Line 1, column 739, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e sales of game software, cds, dvd lower , are not popular and even have a few pl...
^^
Line 1, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... game software, cds, dvd lower , are not popular and even have a few places sale...
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Line 1, column 785, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not popular and even have a few places sale these.
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Line 1, column 799, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and even have a few places sale these.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3355704698 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3751366778 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.113209765 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313940006165 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148604121754 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122545680779 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313940006165 0.15604864568 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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