Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is widely argued that the use of advertising goods has been received a great deal of publicity in recent years .Although there might be negatively develop l strongly believe the opposite angle will be outweighed by its merits
It can not be denied that there was an upsurge in the product being advertised ;however the negative side still arose. The first inevitable tendency is that ads give an exaggerated account of new products. To illustrate, it is far from rare for companies to spend a large amount of money into the creation if ingenious marketing approach , a focal selling point is that the advertising agency aim at aesthetical novelty and shrewd ads instead of substantiating the quality of the products .Not only marketing gimmick do use to stand out from the competitors but it also exaggerated claims regarding their products. The Chinese ads - making on fruits will be the most acceptable to exemplify this phenomenon . As a consequence, advertiser may have the tendency of impulsive purchase as consumers often equate newess with good quality
Although to deny the net positive of advertising's influence is unacceptable , l opine that the tangible merits of advertisement vastly outweigh any aforementioned undesirable revolutions . To start with, international free trade have been accelerated imports and exports between nations , offering job opportunities to every citizen. As products are innovated non-stop, which leads to the need of recruiting designers, marketing executives are unable to apply employee termination , which contributes to promoting and captabulting profits of a firm without geographical limits. With regard to economics , the pervasiveness of advertising spread across the globe , which enables customers to be able to aware of new products on every platform . Since the surge in quantities of commercials have appeared , the significant increase of choices sent to clients along with uncountable marketing gimmicks to allure new customers such as sale off 50% , cost minimization , buy one get one,…
In conclusion , l believe that the positive development associated with job opportunity and the benefits is brought to customers , eclipsed by impulse buying and exaggeration of product fact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, in conclusion, such as, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53623188406 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18513135183 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.644832426 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.222222222 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963840931856 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335258672905 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040157818627 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657988962801 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014990232667 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.