Social media is affecting people’s lives negatively. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely acknowledged that social media plays a significant role and the impact of social media on the lives of people has always been a controversial topic throughout the years. Although it is argued that social media is harmful resulting from the declines in face-to-face communication along with the potential danger that might undesirably affect people who participate in social media while others believe that users are able to improve their confidence in real life communication and have control over their privacy settings. From my perspective, I believe that the effect of social media on the lives of people is not harmful for people.
It is understandable that some people are concerned about the risk of privacy invasion. For example, their data might be leaked that provide an opportunity for scammers to better gain access to personal information and take advantage of it. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, however, others contend that this can be fixed because the users are voluntarily and they are able to take control of their accounts by filtering the information before posting it on social media. For instance, the privacy of users is guaranteed by the feature of social media that allows people to go private and limit the number of people that are able to see the secret information; therefore, helpfully prevent from the risk of losing personal crucial data.
In addition, social media has a wide-range of networks that provide global connectivity, it enables the interaction between people and cuts off geographical barriers. Besides, a decline in face to face communication between people is being contributed by several factors that are not just social media including diseases such as Covid-19, which would limit the working range of people and have a strong impact on the economies of the world without the help of social media. Moreover, the potential application of social media has been proved due to its help during the quarantine by arranging the meetups between people and fueling the productivity of individuals compared to working in a workplace.
In conclusion, while it is argued that social media is negatively affecting people’s lives negatively, I am convinced that social media not only plays an important role but also greatly contributes to major advances in multiple applications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22427440633 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8818873948 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498680738786 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0994849432 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.0 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4545454545 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301368192716 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126633238481 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646231210815 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197513169058 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481949550712 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.