it is said that people’s life now is becoming more and more stressful. What do you think is the cause of this? what solutions can you suggest?
It is widely acknowledged that stress in people’s life is becoming more widespread among many people these days. In this essay, I will elaborate on these problems, and then propose a number of feasible methods to be adopted.
There are myriad problems that human beings can deal with, the most significant of which are the volume of work and the enhancement of living spending. With regard to the former, the working environment is more and more competitive and people tend to spend longer hours at work to finish all the tasks. For example, the staff can spend more than 10 hours per day at the company with the aim of accomplishing all the deadlines. When it comes to the latter, people are willing to work as much as possible to earn money. For instance, a worker in the business is not only working as a sale but also in another position with the purpose of earning more wages.
Practical measures should be taken into consideration to alleviate such issues, associated with spending time relaxing and the government's prevention. In terms of the first idea, despite being busy, people should spend more time relaxing their bodies and mind. For example, sometimes people need to enjoy a wonderful life such as listening to music, going walking, and watching comedy to comfort their brain. As far as the second point is concerned, authorities need to control the pricing market of the whole country. For instance, the government should prevent the increase of inflation in order to improve the cost of living for society.
In conclusion, there are good grounds for the fact that people face up to the negative emotions of stress, but the aforementioned approaches can mitigate the phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94425087108 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66430024459 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0537267577 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16852116955 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609754686591 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610977467231 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107167386966 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458362680827 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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