The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report of a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart below illustrates the duration of leisure enjoyed by males and females in a typical week in 1998 - 1999, according to their gender and employment status. As is observed, males enjoyed more free time than women, and employed people had less leisure time for hobbies or relaxing activities than retired or unemployed people.
Now turning back to the details, among the employed full-time people, men had about 45 hours of leisure time compared to women, who had almost 40 hours. There is no data for men with part-time employment, but the part-time employed women had slightly more time for themselves each week than females with full-time employment.
On the other hand, unemployed and retired males and females enjoyed more leisure time than any other type of people. However, in both categories, men had more free time than women. Such men had 80 hours, which hits the highest point of the chart compared to ten 10 hours fewer leisure hours by females.
Lastly, the housewives enjoyed approximately 45 hours of free time in a week, during no figures for men staying at home.
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report of a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report of a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words
- The bar chart below illustrates the duration of leisure enjoyed by males and females in a typical week in 1998 1999 according to their gender and employment status As is observed males enjoyed more free time than women and employed people had less leisure 100
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report of a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report of a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, lastly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48252328101 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.887094677 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208893085405 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10677903702 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327341824661 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13946973066 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384811155251 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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