Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
Present of Friends and family is very important . Due to people conditions work , more people start to move away from their friends and families and they take a long time to gathering together . In my opinion this development has some advantages and some disadvantages .
As a huge construction of many major cities ,some people start to move away from their friends and families to get more work opportunities. I think this development has advantages as well as disadvantages . Moving away from friends and families will let people lose sense of gathering and sense of humor and this will lead to more depression .Also they will not be able to care for their families especially when they become old . In other hand this development has also some advantages .
Century generation facing many problems one of them to live away from their friends and families .I believe that this development has some advantages like they can get the work they dream for . Also they will be totally depending on themselves and this will create strong generation able to take any decisions in their life. Also this will lead to decrease the population density .
In conclusion ,to move away from friends and family is doubled - edged sword so we have to balance this phenomena . Presence of families and friends is the most important things we have to care for as well as people must depend on themselves .People can search for other ways to connect easily with their friends and families as much as they can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86561264822 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62044293759 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0037476839 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.583333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528941331414 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210469827773 0.084324248473 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103912901756 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.366482235861 0.151304729494 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111565211231 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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