The balance between human needs and environmental preservation is a central topic in the contemporary world. As we expand our cities and industries, we must also consider the effects on our natural habitats. With that in mind, here is the question for the discussion board: Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?
Jason
Hey everyone! I have always believed in a balance. While we can't ignore the importance of farmland, housing, and industry for our survival and economic growth, we should not overlook our duty to protect endangered animals. By preserving their habitats, we are also preserving the balance in our ecosystem.
Marty
Hey folks, I think that it's indeed crucial to maintain a balanced approach here. We do need to take care of our necessities like housing and farming, but at the same time, it's essential to remember that we share this planet with other species. We can't disregard their right to live for our convenience.
Both Marty and Jason support the idea of a balance. Human needs expanded rapidly during last decades, so it’s our sacred duty to preserve the nature. Moreover, by choosing to commit to this goal we are also supporting future generations from dangers unbalanced ecosystems may pose. We should not forget about our own origin: we are all the inevitable part of nature, the common house we all share. It is correct, as Jason and Marty stated, that only balanced approach can provide relief to those of us who may need it in the near future. Farmers should be able to continue provide humanity with food, industry must commit to our economic growth and all of us have not to forget about those animals who are in danger. I completely disagree that our needs are of a more importance than needs of wildlife we threaten. Responsible growth surely involves care about ecosystem we rely on.
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