Experience is far more effective and useful than formal education and books. What is your opinion?
An increasing trend in today's world is the emergence of the argument that experience is more effective than books and education. This essay will discuss the both aspects of the above statement, concerned with the notion that
"education is far more important than experience", using a practical approach. At the outset, there are several arguments in favor of my stance, the most significant one includes not only the growth of every individual on the planet but also the betterment of the society using proper guidelines of education. Thanks to the benefits offered, one can not only attain greater success and effectiveness but can also enhance his productivity, efficiency, and quality of life with greater ease. Other factors impacted by education are awareness, discipline, and motivation for career development.
Furthermore, many other factors like knowledge, communication, and social skills can also be taken into account, due to book reading and formal education. So we can not neglect the importance of education in our lives but experience has its own place in one's career and growth. As books are written after experience, so we can say that both are interconnected in many aspects. Hence, experience has its own importance and effectiveness but without knowledge and formal education it is considered worthless, because a literate person can defeat every difficulty in his life due to his exposure with books and education.
To conclude, from my perspective every government should pay attention towards the formal education and experience as well. The government of Pakistan is paying attention on its educational legislations. Citizens are being encouraged to adhere to applicable laws and regulations to bring prosperity and efficiency in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 5.75862068966 486% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45652173913 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18273540573 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5863444464 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277352904628 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940381356527 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765033377363 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154925771293 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311901485628 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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