in my opinion nowadays, Many people consider the experience is more important compared to formal education. I completely agree with the statement that experience teaches a person better than books.
we cannot learn everything from books. most of the students find difficulties in concentration into books and they are not be able to achieved any information. when you have doing things by your own it stays long term in mind because it is practical. books no doubt are a great source o knowledge as it gives us about an idea about a particular subject in a very extensive way, from books you definitely get to know about everything it is a great source of information but a person can gain knowledge and learn may important through their practical experiences. for example, we do not learn to drive by reading books, only when we practice the we can driving. it gives us vital skills that book learning cannot, Experience put in the trenches and gives you the opportunity to practice the concept that you have learned. practice makes you perfect and more you practice there will be very helps you to build you future. your grades cannot helps you but your skills will.
At last, they are supplemental but can not be replaced by each other. although I agree with this that the knowledge that is gained from practice and experiencing things is more important. experience in the real world actually helps you to survive in the real world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, so, for example, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68376385875 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1983772986 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6923076923 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15782136229 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579647276488 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524101786778 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126271466055 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763000398518 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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