You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and
their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Today, the human society is presented with various challenges, which sparks a heated debate over the importance of taking risks in an individual’s both professional and personal lives. Despite its obvious disadvantages, risk taking does have more advantages, which I strongly advocate. The essay below will give an insight into the author’s personal perspective.
To begin with, there are certain drawbacks from the act of indulging oneself into risks, including severe consequences to their safety. This involves magnificent dedication of energy even a part of one’s own life only to seeking for any opportunities from certain challenges, posing inevitable threats to life guarantee. As harsh as such a safety problem, a waste of time, efforts and finances should also be included as another drawback. Although the quote ‘trials and errors’ holds the key position on the ladder to success, risk taking can consist of unnecessary stages to assess results from engaging with an issue, while the process can be shortened by acquiring related knowledge from the previous period. A common example for this is the case of Thomas Edison, in which his thousands of failed experiments could have been greatly reduced by finishing comprehensive education at school, while his success of light bulb innovation would have been achieved earlier. The given evidence can clearly suggest any wary consideration of risk taking should be made before carrying out the act into reality.
Notwithstanding the disadvantages, the advantages are still dominate in the practice of adapting challenges. One of these is self development, where a person can upgrade their levels of patience, hard work and bravery after an issue addressed before. Moreover, given the quote ‘practice makes perfects’, any risks can be a task to be fulfilled in the reality. This means that through various stages of making attempts into achieving set goals, an individual might arouse within themselves a sentimental sense of honors to their own hard work, therefore creating steady movements forwards on the path to success. For instance, through heavy allocation of time and efforts into study, many students in developing countries are able to achieve 100% scholarships to renowned global universities and colleges. Given the analysis above, it is clear that the positive impacts of risk taking indeed outweigh the reverse counterparts.
In conclusion, from the mentioned explanations, it evidently appears that the adaptation of challenges introduces more benefits than drawbacks to the daily life. In the future, as people’s recognition and academic levels are raised more significantly, the practice of adapting challenges will be popularised and carried out effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5355450237 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01004584721 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6962403323 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.411764706 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8235294118 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170979223474 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530851376583 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039522270892 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995970781434 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564983655228 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 78.4519038076 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.