You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The hot debated topic whether people should be able to keep all the money they earn and should pay tax to the state is still controversial. This essay will delve into two categories and state my opinion.
On the one hand, There are some reasons that people should keep all their income. The first reason is people earn livings to support their family and fullfil their needs. They spend their budgets for food, transports and other necessary demands. if all the money they earn is saved for these items, their living standards will be higher and higher, which acts as a push factors for their work. They are encouraged to work harder and more effectively. This, therefore, results in betering the country's economiy. Moreover, there is a sceptical opinition whether the money they pay for tax can be used for the right purposes or it just goes into and enriches some individuals.
On the other hand, the view of people allocating some of their salary for tax has possitive impacts. First of all, the government can improve all the amenties which are vital for their daily life such as the infastructure, public transport, education and health care. Second, this money can be act as a supporter for them when they are retired or in bad health. For example, Germany is considered one of the countries which tax rather high on personal income. However, thi country has the reputation for taking good care of its citizens.
In conclusion, from all above analizations, I am of the opinion that people should spend some money on tax because it not only benefits themselves but alo put their own effort to help others in need. This rewarding action will make a better community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...for food, transports and other necessary demands. if all the money they earn is s...
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Suggestion: If
...ransports and other necessary demands. if all the money they earn is saved for th...
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Suggestion:
...First of all, the government can improve all the amenties which are vital for the...
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...onclusion, from all above analizations, I am of the opinion that people should sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79238754325 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4768319812 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8646711489 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322124059749 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109229379288 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873147411242 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222721237988 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913609044091 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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