You have recently bought an airline ticket from a travel agency and unfortunately you are not able to fly on these dates. Write a letter to the travel agency manager to cancel the ticket. Explain in your letter
- What are the flight details?
- Why do you want to cancel it?
- What would you like him/her to do about it?
The map of Garlsdon town presents two proposed sites for a new supermarket (S). The first site is located in the northeastern part of the town, near the main road. this location is easily accessible from the town’s residential areas and is in close proximity to a bus stop, which would make it convenient for shoppers using public transport. however, it is near existing commercial buildings, and the area is already somewhat developed.
The second proposed site is situated to the south, near a residential district and close to a park. this site is less developed, offering more space for construction. it is further from the main road but could potentially attract shoppers who live in the southern part of the town. however, it may not be as convenient for those who rely on public transport.
In conclusion, both sites have advantages. The northeastern site is better located for accessibility, while the southern site offers more space and could serve residents in that area more effectively. Ultimately, the choice of location will depend on factors such as convenience, space availability, and access to public transport.
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| 2024-11-29 | Nguyen Thinh | 11 | view |
| 2015-12-11 | RBH | 50 | view |
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon A new supermarket S is planned for the town The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket 78
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- The diagrams explain the ways and devices in which the two types of materials are manufactured for the purpose of construction 84
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienc 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...n part of the town, near the main road. this location is easily accessible from the ...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... the town’s residential areas and is in close proximity to a bus stop, which would make it conv...
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Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...nt for shoppers using public transport. however, it is near existing commercial buildin...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...sidential district and close to a park. this site is less developed, offering more s...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
..., offering more space for construction. it is further from the main road but could...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... live in the southern part of the town. however, it may not be as convenient for those ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99029841108 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7424212797 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0133201782763 0.215688989381 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00657768850101 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115063362857 0.0843802449381 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0102611497967 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000720085094801 0.0819641961636 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.