Some believe that research on family history is a useful thing to do, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Recently, tracing familial lineage has become an increasingly popular trend around. While some people believe this is a beneficial practice, others argue that it is meaningless. In this essay, I will discuss both arguments before reaching my final opinion.
On the one hand, proponents of studying ancestral knowledge often highlight its significance in preserving family traditions, raising health awareness and its educational value. Firstly, learning about family history helps people keep valuable stories alive for future generations, which plays a crucial role in perserving their identity and strengthening family connections. Another point is examining family health history may alert people to genetic diseases, which raises their awareness of protecting their health more carefully. Finally, researching the past not only enriches people’s knowledge of their family, but also the history of their country and the world such as cultures, and events during different historical periods in which their ancestors lived in.
On the other hand, opponents of this trend argue that it is time-consuming, expensive and may not yield meaningful results. While the process can take a large amount of time and in some cases, people must pay huge sums for documents and services, the information collected may be incomplete and inaccurate. Furthermore, some painful truths can be unintentionally uncovered. They might discover unpleasant family secrets such as crime, historical injustices, or family tragedies, which could lead to emotional distress. Therefore, some believe such efforts and money should be better spent on personal development and existing family issues.
In my opinion, research on our family background and history is important as it helps to raise our awareness in protecting our roots, health and enhancing our knowledge. However, this should be done in a proper way to avoid any unexpected negative consequences such as wasting resources and emotional harm.
In conclusion, although there are arguments both for and against researching family history, I believe it is beneficial for those who do it thoughtfully and with the right purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65337423313 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96430297031 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.530294433 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.866666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220673012898 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713914089142 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471770236304 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125264616075 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463688985856 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.