The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparisons where relevant

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The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.

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2025-05-17 Trần Ánh Vy 61 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the maps of the fishing village in 1974 12,000 population. The fishing village h...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cluding hotels, golf course, two beaches , original village, village and tourist s...
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Line 4, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te if the beach was the original village people who lived there for a long time. ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 322.0 196.424390244 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59316770186 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25591884555 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490683229814 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4779819988 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170648199865 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573376133831 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417997044535 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117098478657 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608988103695 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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