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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Model answer:1
The given chat provides information about the unpaid working hours per week of both married men and women. At a glance, there is a significant rise...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 9.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 9
No. of Words: 233 200
No. of Characters: 1141 900
No. of Different Words: 86 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.907 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.897 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.618 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.811 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.391 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4