You are working for company. You need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why want to take time off work.
• Explain why want to take time off work.
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear Mr. John Collins,
I am a clerk, James Smith, who is working under your guidance. I am writing this letter to you regarding my requirement for the holidays. Allow me to describe the situation for the necessity of time off.
From the last 2 months, I was doing the backbreaking work because the responsibility of the duties of one of my colleague, Mr. Mike Michelson, was on my shoulders. Since, he was suffering from serious health related problems. Due to this, even, the laboured had been done by me on some Sundays. Fortunately, my staff member has recovered from his illness and now, he is doing his work normally. As, I have the tremendous tiredness so that’s why some rest is needed to me.
Further, it would be greatly appreciated by me if you could grant me one week leave. Because I have planned a 7 days hill tour with my family for relaxation.
Finally, I want to assure you that the office will not be affected by my absence because I have finished my future task in advance and the rest of my tasks will be handled by Mr. Mike. Thus, I hope that now, you would not face any difficulty to give me vacations.
Yours faithfully,
James Smith.
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 211 200
No. of Characters: 911 1000
No. of Different Words: 133 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.811 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.318 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.539 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.396 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.649 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
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