You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the price are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to confirm the availability of electronic food processor of Morphy Brand.
During my last visit to Tesco Extra store of Leeds, this product was out of stock as it was on offer price. Original price of the food processor was 95pounds but it was reduced to 52 pounds so, it was a great deal. When I spoke to the staff member regarding the stock of the product, he told me to inquire in coming weekend. I called them up and tried to find out about the availability of the product on Saturday but they said they haven’t got any updates about the stock so, I...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Characters: 909 1000
No. of Different Words: 115 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.04 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 9.114 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.629 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
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