Topic: Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.( Sample_answer_salmon)
The matter of culture has always stirred up burning controversies in any country because culture is often regarded the "national spirit". Many people hold firmly the belief that countries that open the door to the influx of foreign visitors should welcome the diversity of cultures coming alongside. My sentiments, nevertheless, are at par with the notion that people from another countries should adhere to the local traditions and behavioral patterns for the following reasons.
To begin with, one of the main benefits gained from the gratitude towards local rules is that it shows the guests' re...
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Sentence: England is examplary in this case on the ground that, according to a survey carried out by the University of Economics in Wales, most of the governmental budget derives from multi-cultural tourism.
Error: examplary Suggestion: exemplary
Sentence: Therefore, refining the heteogeneous income to the traditional patterns of the locality may prove to be more expedient and peaceful.
Error: heteogeneous Suggestion: heterogeneous
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