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The surface of a section of Route 101, paved just two years ago by Good Intentions Roadways, is now badly cracked with a number of dangerous potholes. In another part of the state, a section of Route 40, paved by Appian Roadways more than four years ago, is still in good condition. In a demonstration of their continuing commitment to quality, Appian Roadways recently purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery and hired a new quality-control manager. Therefore, I recommend hiring Appian Roadways to construct the access roads for all our new shopping malls. I predict that our Appian access roads will not have to be repaired for at least four years."
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Sentence: Secondly,author mentions that Appian Roadways purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery for continuing to their quality commitment does not mean that construction of roads will last for four years.Author forgot to mention the specifications of machine.May be Good Intentions roadways also have this machinary.So it will not be correct to relate the duration of road endure to machinary.
Error: machinary Suggestion: machinery
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Need a conclusion paragraph.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
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Score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1614 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.761 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.486 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.494 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.441 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.737 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5