In recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.
The whole world has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Presently,it is a very shocking situation that a massive number of youngsters involved in crime is increasing day by day. In this essay, I would like to account for reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some solutions.
There are multifarious factors are responsible for juvenile delinquency.First and foremost, Media is one powerful influence. Many times, vulgarity and violence is shown on TV. Children are vulnerable and accept it as natural and try to imitate what is shown. Another cause of crime among youth is the cha...
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a massive number of youngsters involved in crime is increasing day by day
a massive number of youngsters involved in crime are increasing day by day
Media is one powerful influence.
Media has one powerful influence.
increasing poverty, unemployment and competition is causing hopelessness and frustration
increasing poverty, unemployment and competition are causing hopelessness and frustration
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