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Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who
is an expert in that field.
A study on the children, before the age of talking, has shown that they can find harmony in music. Responses of children were significantly different in a harmonious music than those lacking harmony. Therefore, naturally people can have a judgment about the harmony in music, without having an iota of knowledge and expertise. But when it comes to make a “critical” judgment, expertise is necessarily required.
The statement above claims that the critical judgment of an expert is merited while the inexpert critical judgment does have little value. With one qualification, I strongly agree wi...
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