Learning a second language is a crucial demand nowadays because of globalized world.Due to this importance of language learning , the question of the effective age of initiating to a second language comes to the point.there are two sides , ones claim that starting to learn a foreign language at early age ( in primary school ) has more advantages than learning it older age ( secondary school) and others claim that learning a foreign language at early age has more disadvantages. ın other words , coin has two sides. ın my opinion , a child should start learning a second language as early as possible to become one step ahead cope with the global and modern world.
on the one hand , There are some negative situations coming up with starting to learn a language at early age . firstly , there may be a waste of time because a kid may need to spend more time in core subjects such as maths and science. secondly ,while showing an effort for acquiring to learn a new language , some problems can come out in mother tongue.There can be a delay development of child's first language.besides of these, it can add load on kids and take their fun time.
on the other hand , a kid can reach a lot of benefits from learning at early age. the capacity of learning at early age is amazing. the ability of registering of new facts and commands is pretty high . the curiosity of learning new things , enjoying copying things, learning faster, having no fear of making mistakes are big advantages of starting earlier.also regular practice is necessary to develop fluency and accuracy and at early age one can take advantage of creating more time to develop fluency and accuracy.
to conclude , Due to large view of benefits such as becoming one step ahead , incerasing their competitiveness, having better education, better job opportunities , starting at early age has more advantages than starting at older age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.928125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8090039915 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509375 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.536774813 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.363636364 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334441623752 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119029564456 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122942502417 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19743207104 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122094330177 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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