Essay topics:
Benefits of doing volunteer works.
People say that doing volunteer is the best way for us to become a better person, because it has a lot of benefits. Firstly, it helps us gain a lot of experiences in our life about: education, social work, health care, marketing,... Secondly, our social skills such as: team working, communication,... will be improved by doing volunteer works. Finally, it can help us make a lot of friends who have the same hobbies anh goals. In short, doing volunteer works has a lot of benefits we should know to become a better person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ion, social work, health care, marketing,... Secondly, our social skills such as: ...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...lls such as: team working, communication,... will be improved by doing volunteer w...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 431.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 93.0 315.596192385 29% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63440860215 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.10542279907 4.20363070211 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84655969015 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 176.041082164 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 128.7 506.74238477 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.13214283 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8333333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280258114683 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151158000338 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172615435306 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280258114683 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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