Benefits of doing volunteer works.
These days, people in society have more time to participate in welfare works. Volunteer works in one of them, which has lots of advantages and benefits. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will outline and explore in this following essay.
To begin with, each individual has his or her own differences, true colors, personalities, etc. Hence, working as a volunteer in a group is an easy and captivating way to integrate as well as surround ourselves with disparate people. Besides, we can make acquaintances of them and truly have a wide relationship. Since everyone has his or her own life stories, we can also withdraw experiences and deeply sympathize with them.
Secondly, social activities are the dominant sources to acquire knowledge, as well as social skills besides newspapers, books or technological devices. Especially, students need significant skills in order to have a good preparation for their lives. Moreover, as no one controls, commands or even leads us, we are free and thrilled as well as overjoyed to plan and spend times doing helpful stuff.
Thirdly, notwithstanding we are living in the age of modern ficed ideas, many people are the victims of violences, racialism, injustices. Some are homeless and suffering from poor, diseases and other toilsome things. Consequently, interacting and volunteering are the best way to support and change their lives. Perhaps someone would consider as inappreciable aids, but at least they are the only rays of hope for ones who are in need. We-ourselves also receive the best happiness, pleasure and enjoyment.
To sum up, I am of opinion that volunteer works contain full of usefulness, benefits and joys. As a results, people should devote and share loves to society, which would help one another and bring humors, good experiences and satisfaction to us
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, at least, i feel, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13758389262 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98393103496 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.019395161 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0588235294 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134341323202 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351323708997 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531435880322 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630317947656 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345601485799 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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