changes of people's diets in Vietnam?

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changes of people's diets in Vietnam?

In my opinion, people's eating habits have changed in the past few years. Nowadays, there are already a lot of fast food restaurants. Processed foods have become popular as well. I think people these days don't eat as many healthy foods compared in the past. Also, I think people in the past are more concerned about eating at the right time. However, people tend to skip meals because of several reasons such as diet or busy schedules.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ular as well. I think people these days dont eat as many healthy foods compared in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, i think, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 358.0 1615.20841683 22% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 77.0 315.596192385 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64935064935 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.96225663767 4.20363070211 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26644772555 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 59.0 176.041082164 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.766233766234 0.561755894193 136% => OK
syllable_count: 112.5 506.74238477 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.07015868 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179793679726 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779720115071 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656965325508 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179793679726 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 78.4519038076 19% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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