Compare and contrast two clothing fashion in two different countries and explain which one you prefer and why

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Compare and contrast two clothing fashion in two different countries and explain which one you prefer and why

Every nation around the world has a traditional costume. We can tell which country they are from just by looking at their outfits. Despite the fact that Hanbok from Korea and Ao Dai from Vietnam have many significant differences, there are some similarities that we may overlook.
The difference between these two outfits is huge, especially the structure. The ao dai for men and women are the same, unlike Hanbok, which is divided into two categories for the two genders. The Ao Dai is made up of two parts: the tunic and the pants, while the Hanbok consists of two pieces: the jeogori, the chima for women, and the baji for men. Another distinction is the dress's design and style. In fact, the tunic of Aodai adds curves to the body and covers the entire body except for the head, hands, and feet. This has two flaps: a front and a back. On the front, it is often embroidered with patterns or poems. Additionally, Ao Dai's collar is shaped like a V, whereas its sleeves are sewn tight to the hand. In contrast, the jeogori is a jacket worn by both men and women, but the women's version is quite short, typically falling between the breasts and waist, while the men’s is longer, usually coming down to the waist. Curved sleeves and a tying ribbon at the breast complete the look. There's also a noticeable difference in the lower part of both outfits. For instance, the pants of Ao Dai have wide legs and are sewn to the heels. It used to be made of sturdy fabric, but it is now frequently sewn with soft, loose fabrics. Though white is the most common color, the current fashion trend is for the pants to be the same color as the tunic. With Hanbok, the chima is a full, wrap-around skirt that is typically paired with a petticoat. The chima runs from the body's trunk to the feet, elegantly flaring out as it goes. However, baji, which are men’s pants, are designed to be simpler and are usually worn baggy.
There are many resemblances between these two traditional costumes. First, both have two parts: the jacket and the pants or skirt. Furthermore, Ao Dai and Hanbok come in a variety of colors that can indicate the wearer's age, social status, and marital status. As a matter of fact, for Ao Dai, young girls wear white to symbolize purity, while older and unmarried girls dress in soft pastel colors. Married women are the only ones who wear dark, multicolored dresses, and the future bride wears red or pink, the traditional colors of marriage, during the ceremony. Similarly to Ao Dai, with Hanbok, children, for example, wore bright colors, while middle-aged men and women wore muted hues. Matrons wore green jeogori and red chima, while yellow and red were worn by unmarried women. Women with sons, on the other hand, wore navy. The upper classes dressed in a variety of colors. On the other hand, the working class was required to wear white but dressed in pale pink, light green, grey, and charcoal on special occasions. Additionally, patterns were both embroidered on traditional Korean and Vietnamese clothing to represent wishes and bring luck to the wearer. For example, peonies in Korean or dragons and phoenixes in Vietnamese on a wedding dress signified a wish for honor, wealth, happiness, or redamancy.
As we can see, Hanbok is structurally beautiful. The balance of the structured top and full bottom lends the hanbok a simple structural beauty and rhythmic flow that complements the wearer's movement. Hence, while wearing Korean traditional clothing, the body can move freely and gracefully. Nonetheless, I personally prefer Ao Dai to Hanbok. It is both simple and elegant. When done correctly, it will gracefully contour to a woman's body. It flows smoothly and does not restrict body movement. Wearing it automatically makes a woman look slim, elongated, demure, and extremely attractive. Many schools in Vietnam require female students to wear white Ao Dai and I especially love its pure, solid white.
In conclusion, although Ao Dai and Hanbok differ in structure and style, they share a common meaning in terms of color and pattern selection. As a result, these distinctions make the traditional costumes of each country unique, and Ao Dai has become my favorite clothing because of its characteristic.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nto two categories for the two genders. The Ao Dai is made up of two parts: the tun...
^^^
Line 2, column 1000, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...ribbon at the breast complete the look. Theres also a noticeable difference in the low...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...olors of marriage, during the ceremony. Similarly to Ao Dai, with Hanbok, children, for e...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'wearers'' or 'wearer's'?
Suggestion: wearers'; wearer's
... and rhythmic flow that complements the wearers movement. Hence, while wearing Korean t...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, similarly, so, whereas, while, except for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 10.4138276553 423% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3522.0 1615.20841683 218% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 727.0 315.596192385 230% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84456671252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.19258485972 4.20363070211 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56722404606 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 365.0 176.041082164 207% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502063273728 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1080.0 506.74238477 213% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 15.0 2.52805611222 593% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 16.0721442886 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9557571706 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9069767442 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9069767442 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41860465116 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 3.4128256513 527% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120275276065 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279935233606 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457039086936 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598960500516 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404687789818 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 78.4519038076 229% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nto two categories for the two genders. The Ao Dai is made up of two parts: the tun...
^^^
Line 2, column 1000, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...ribbon at the breast complete the look. Theres also a noticeable difference in the low...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...olors of marriage, during the ceremony. Similarly to Ao Dai, with Hanbok, children, for e...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'wearers'' or 'wearer's'?
Suggestion: wearers'; wearer's
... and rhythmic flow that complements the wearers movement. Hence, while wearing Korean t...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, similarly, so, whereas, while, except for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 44.0 10.4138276553 423% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3522.0 1615.20841683 218% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 727.0 315.596192385 230% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84456671252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.19258485972 4.20363070211 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56722404606 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 365.0 176.041082164 207% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502063273728 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1080.0 506.74238477 213% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 15.0 2.52805611222 593% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 16.0721442886 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9557571706 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9069767442 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9069767442 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41860465116 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 3.4128256513 527% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120275276065 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279935233606 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457039086936 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598960500516 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404687789818 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 78.4519038076 229% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.