Effects of overpopulation in big cities
Overpopulation has several negative impacts on big cities’ life. The first effect of overpopulation is environmental degradation. Due to overpopulation, there are a lot of vehicles on the roads resulting in immense traffic. Exhaust fumes from these vehicles like carbon dioxide are directly released into the atmosphere, which causes air pollution. Moreover, many forests and lands are destroyed to meet the demand for human settlements. As a result, many species have lost their habitat and been on the verge of extinction. For instance, the Florida panther once ranged throughout the southeastern United States now is listed as one of the endangered species because of habitat destruction and fragmentation through urban sprawl. A rise in unemployment is the second consequence of overpopulated cities. As the number of people looking for jobs is increasing, it is more difficult to distribute jobs for all these huge numbers of workers. Consequently, the demand for work is greater than the available occupations, leading to an increased number of unemployed individuals. Additionally, the unemployed still need to feed their families; consequently, they have no choice but to commit crimes such as theft, which is a contributor to elevating the crime rate in megacities. In conclusion, since overpopulation in megalopolises causes both environmental downfall and a higher unemployment rate, people should think about appropriate solutions and take steps to solve this problem as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...downfall and a higher unemployment rate, people should think about appropriate so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56331877729 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36455443414 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659388646288 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8138263174 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162579851949 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072462558393 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130422126876 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162579851949 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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