fast food
Life Today has become fast and lifestyle changes as it happens for food, it changes a lot from the past. Nowadays, people are addicted to a certain type of food which is fast food. Fast food is a term given to food that can be prepared and served quickly, and to cook it in a huge speed it might be prepared in a bad way Like frying in a bad quality oil, and this is dangerous on the health. In my opinion, fast food should be banned because it leads to Obesity and the bad quality of the materials.
According to research fast food is related to obesity because of its high percentage of fat. Obesity is when your body has fatter than it needs. This can give off a bad effect because your body will be heavier to carry around and it makes you lazy and is not good for your health. People might think that obesity just makes you look bad on the outside but, they should also consider the inside.
Fast food restaurants use a lot of bad materials in making their food. The oil used to make the food is used again for days and they also use vegetables that are not fresh. The way fast food restaurants try to hide their use of bad vegetables is by making their commercials using fresh vegetables to make people believe that their products are fresh. People should always recognize that the commercials are very different from the real product; you can sometimes realize this by going to the store and getting something different from what you see.
On the other hand, there are people believe fast food is beneficial in more than one way. To illustrate, in this fast world everybody hectic at work. So, sometimes people have no time to prepare food at home. During this situation, they buy fast food easily from the market. Also, people can easily take it anywhere. For example, during some journeys and long rides. Also, Fast food is more delicious than home-made food. Yes, there are some pros for fast food but its disadvantages are more like obesity and bad quality. So, I think it's better to ban fast food.
In conclusion, eating fast food is a big risk to our health because it can cause different illnesses like obesity. Furthermore, the restaurants use bad materials in making it. In my opinion, fast food should be banned for these two reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...it in a huge speed it might be prepared in a bad way Like frying in a bad quality oil, and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50731707317 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31557846526 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451219512195 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2237913729 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533260680601 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21496860239 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172254551168 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353247730505 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161972227435 0.056905535591 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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