Good friends

Essay topics:

Good friends

A true friend behaves politely and had a good manner .He makes his or her friend ,the luckiest person in the world.
Good friends are loyal and they are trustworthy.
A true friend never lets his or her friend alone during their tough time
This bonding creates a pure relation of true friendship.
Childhood friends are always remembered for whole life of a person. They actually denotes to true friendship. With a friend a life becomes easy on every stage of it and results always in better way. It is quite obvious that definitely there would some issues or fight between friends but it makes their relation more strong.
There are things that true friend will never do to each other :
1_ they never lie .
2_ they never cheat.
3-they never talk in behind's one's back.

Always remember that one rotten apple can spoil a group of mature apples, so,
We should have the best friend.
At last, This life is full of ups and downs , so you need someone who can understand you and support you in all the situations. Those special people are called true friends.
True Friends have always a special place in one’s life whether they meet once in a week, month or a year.
True friendship is always valued when friends understand the true meaning of it.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68918918919 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22735407442 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8240142921 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342500924991 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127105652175 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139427366432 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145038278399 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152980855902 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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