These days, there is an ongoing debate among people regarding unable to find jobs by more young people because young people leaving schools in many counties. There are contradicting opinions that are counterbalanced by sufficient evidence on both sides of the debate. I personally believe that strict rules implement to education is the perfect way of solving this particular problem that is currently plaguing the society in recent times.
One of the predominant reasons that has been discussed among the majority regarding the many countries are not interest in education this countries are very worst. Because economic problem as well as not interest to many families. As well as money problem and daily food problem and daily needs problem and many more. For instance India, Nepal, Saudi and many more countries. This countries are should increase economic value so this problem solve.
Furthermore, the case in point in which the various statements are often mentioned about many countries are not develop because many problem such as no jobs, some time no chance to daily needs, child employee and many more. For instance family problem, income problem, physical problem, family situation and many more. There are some ways to solve this unemployment problem such as every individual countries are should action to reduce the unemployment status.
In nutshell, it can be safely stated that based on the above points that unable to find jobs by more young people because young people leaving school in many countries has an easy and perfect solution. This solution is only feasible under certain above mentioned circumstances. I feel vindicated in my choice.
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- In many countries, more and more young people are leaving schools but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, regarding, so, well, for instance, i feel, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.265917603 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59786901062 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3681864972 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339153980623 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108715437551 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950624705181 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206312433056 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282694483055 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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