Nowadays extreme sports has become much popular among young people. This type of activities has built up much confidence and it is also fun to try out new things. i believe Such activities are not dangerous as people think.
Firstly, extreme sports are exiting. It may make people mind fresh and maintain good mental health. As people can feel that happiness after trying out new things that they have thoughts of doing in their entire life.For example once i had Taken part in marathon and it was my dream to win as while crossing that red ribbon first my happiness was out of level. i was feeling like top of the world. However, it has also built much self-confidence on me .
Furthermore, people thing such type of sports may lead to danger but there are several safety placed and before doing such activities one has got all the knowledge how to protect themselves .moreover before trying sports such as skydiving, people get all the training on how to go smoothly and freely . Trying out those sports and being sucessfull is eventually a happiest thing.
To conclude , i believe such extreme sports dosn't have any drawbacks as it tends to be more exciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78217821782 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49136044341 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628712871287 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9358784595 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8181818182 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914870350202 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354866803318 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458616883926 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522491675462 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326548861941 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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