Nowadays, the lifestyle of people are changing day by day and people love to travel a lot with different customs,culture and behaviour as well. Some individuals say that visitors to another nations should have knowledge about local customs and behaviour, while some argue and believe that country should provide friendly environment for visitors to make them comfortable. This essay will discuss both views and provide a valuable conclusion.
Obviously, it is necessary for visitors to know norms and values of particular country, As they are travelling to another nation, they must know culture, customs and behaviours of people to make them comfortable with local inhabitants amd avoid conflicts during their trip. Secondly, if the traveller will obtain all information before their visit then it can be beneficial for them to tackle some strong strong consequences which may come in their way. Also, it can be easier for travellers to communicate with local people and knowing all the norms and values can be interesting topics for visitors to learn about. It will make their trip more fun and enjoyable.
In the other hand, going through all the unknown customs and behaviour can be difficult for travellers. Therefore, nation should host some comfortable environment for tourist and neglect some strong culture for them. However, it can help tourist to enjoy their visit fully and they may want to visit again and again.For instance, more tourist tends to improve countries economy. The local people will also get the oppurtunity to know about different culture by staying in their own country. The host country should accept the cultural difference.
To conclude, in this age i believe both the visitors and host should welcome cultural difference.Host country should provide warm welcome for tourists and should make them comfortable, where as visitors should also respect countries customs and behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34323432343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73835127012 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.378604199 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.538461538 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32561677016 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127750080128 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116968156136 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248911455515 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121542978015 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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