Recommendation letter for undergraduate school student
RECOMMENDATION LETTER
Vo Thi Muoi
368 Truong Chinh St
Tay Ninh City, Viet Nam 80100
October 16, 2021
Dear Admissions Committee,
I am writing to recommend my student - Le Duong Ngoc Tram - for the PEARL program at Keio University.
My name is Vo Thi Muoi, and you can call me Muoi Vo. I have been working as a literature teacher at Hoang Le Kha Gifted High School for the past thirty years. My teaching life has given me great chances to connect with many lovely students and Tram is one of those students, who I am proud of. I had the pleasure of being Tram's teacher for a year and half. Based on what I know about her, I think that she would be an excellent addition to your school.
Tram had a good manner in study including lessons’ preparations and revisions. With every question she was asked related to lessons, she always had well-prepared answers. Tram also impressed me with her sensitivity to the nuances within literature and her passion for reading, writing and creative expression. Besides, she was genuinely interested in developing her skills and challenging her abilities. Therefore, Tram was an excellent student not only in my class but also in other classes which were clearly represented in her academic transcripts. She had achieved all A grades during a year and half studying here.
Besides studying, Tram also showed her enthusiasm in participating in school activities. In my opinion, Tram is a multi-skilled student who is good not only at studying but also singing and dancing. She joined many music competitions at school and represented school students to participate in other contests celebrated by the city. Whatever she did, she always gave people around her a sense of inspiration. She knew how to create a warm and fun atmosphere which also was one of the reasons she was loved by her family, teachers, and friends.
Tram left our school when she finished the first semester of 11 grade. She moved to another city to start her own independent life. I heard from that she managed all the living expenses and tuition fees and had no longer received any financial aid from her parents. Although from the first year teaching her, I knew that she could make money when she was fifteen, but her story still surprised me a lot.
As far as I know, Keio University seeks out students who are self-motivated and reflective that will be able to identify and solve real world problems after graduating from the program. What I see in Tram, including her personality, abilities and passions, is totally suitable for your university’s criterion. Therefore, I am confident that Tram will excel in your program, and I hope you will consider my recommendation.
If you would like to discuss Tram’s skills and character traits further, please feel free to email me at vothimuoi09@gmail.com
Sincerely,
Vo Thi Muoi
Literature Teacher
Hoang Le Kha Gifted High School
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 24.0651302605 270% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9918699187 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88711944727 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 176.041082164 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0443626662 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157136742561 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457661439703 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543812597919 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099140952227 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125750320793 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.