Self-introduction
Hello teacher and all of you guys. Nice to meet you all. My full name is Khong Thi Van Anh. You can call me “ Van Anh “. My major is English Language and i'm from Translation and Interpretation Class . About my hometown, I come from Kien Giang province. My hobbies are listening to music, watching movies and reading books. I listen to many kind of music but my favorite is R&B .It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable. In my free time I like to watch movies, especially Korean movies . About English , I don't know why I like English either. It's simply that I enjoy learning a new language. I feel very interested in new cultures in Western countries. And also because , you know when you go out on the street , sometimes you will meet foreigners right ? On one occasion, a foreign passenger caught my friend on the road and asked her something. I find their language wonderful and interesting. The feeling of being able to converse with foreigners, it's really cool. I like that . So , I decided to study this major. I hope to study more knowledge , english skills and improve my communication . That’s all about me.Finally , thank you for listening to my self-introduction. Hope you enjoy your day!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rom Translation and Interpretation Class . About my hometown, I come from Kien Gia...
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...ially Korean movies . About English , I dont know why I like English either. Its sim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, really, so, i feel, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.663507109 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82084142332 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663507109005 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1199390499 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.8571428571 106.682146367 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0476190476 20.7667163134 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0214007574048 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00605995176237 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271009281621 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0214007574048 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 13.0946893788 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.27 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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