Self - Introduction
Wednesday, 18 August 2021, 11:50 AM
Good afternoon. It is my pleasure to share with you some of my own information. My full name is Nguyen Thi Cam Tuoi and my student code is B1909013. I am a junior at the Department of English Language and Culture of the School of Foreign Languages at Can Tho University. Our university is quite far from my hometown, Cai Be district, Tien Giang province, which creates my own characters. I am considered to be sociable, humorous, helpful as well as energetic but sensitive and impatient. However, when I am passionate about something, I am going to make attempts to achieve my goals. I love freedom, creativity and peace, so rains and music can make me more comfortable and relaxed. About four skills in English, my reading and writing skills are acceptable while my other skills including listening and speaking are quite awful. Because of this reason, I have to balance my language skills better. Thank you for reading my self-introduction. Wish you a nice day. Thank you !
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- Self Introduction 11
- Write a narrative essay about 1 someone or something that influenced you Or 2 an object gift souvenir possession that is meaningful to you Or 3 an interesting place village city you have been to 11
- Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers while others disagree Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion 78
- Essay topics Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done 84
- Choose 1 of the following questions 1 IELTS essay the qualities that make someone admirable 2 Free style My idol role model 3 Free style Someone I admire An influential person 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e sociable, humorous, helpful as well as energetic but sensitive and impatient. H...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82183908046 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9643101548 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4867609605 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9166666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0231857453461 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124395215894 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430917668295 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0118777464895 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118777464895 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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