Some young children spend an enormous amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping into conclusions. Nevertheless, some may firmly believe that encouraging kids to spare most of their time to play games; others will think that such actions may lead to have a great impact on the future. This essay will be discussing both the views.
To start with, most of the people would agree with the notion that playing games is beneficial, especially in their childhood. The main reason for praising this option is to stay fit physically and mentally. According to a recent study published in the New England Journal of medicine in 2018, children who spend more than ten hours in a week by exercising either indoor or outdoor activities tend to grow faster and become less vulnerable to acquiring diseases. This is because the youngsters playing games like running and jumping will have a stronger immune system. In addition to staying healthy and in good shape, playing sports early can shape one`s future. In other words, most of the famous athletes nowadays started practicing sports at the age of six which allow them to become professionals. For instance, Rafael Nadal - tennis champion, began his journey in the sports world started to practice from the age of six, he played different games until he realized that tennis is his passion. If he hasn’t started earlier, he wouldn`t have become the hero we know today. In this computerized world, we are more concerned about children being sticking inside the home and not interested in a variety of physical activities.
On the other hand, exercising hard to the core can sometimes be harmful. To begin with, by spending most of their time playing, children will not be having enough time for studying which in turn affects their performance. Moreover, injury rates are higher among over-active kids. Take my brother as an example; he suffered from multiple fractures during his boyhood while doing Karate. As a result, his absence during elementary school increased significantly and could not compensate what he missed and ended up with deficient grades.
In conclusion, however playing sports more extended periods improves the stability, concentration power in the individuals and the career pathway of youngsters. Failure to manage between practicing and resting could lead to severe after-effects such as bad performance in school and may accidentally increase the risk of injuries. In my opinion, it is advisable to always balance between practicing and relaxing to overcome any hurdles in their way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27923627685 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1046231345 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615751789976 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2672304884 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123749258514 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350749929737 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384971232865 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721519156502 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147310846677 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.33 Out of 6
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