Supply Chain Management Personal Statement
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: award-winning
... the Head of Projects, Kleos Africa, an award winning athlete and the Best Graduating Student...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Top
...ocial Sciences, Lagos State University. top 1% of 14,639 graduates. For a fact, ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, thus, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 10.4138276553 336% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 41.998997996 257% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 37.0 8.3376753507 444% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4408.0 1615.20841683 273% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 793.0 315.596192385 251% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55863808323 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.30662375533 4.20363070211 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23095035783 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 445.0 176.041082164 253% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561160151324 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1398.6 506.74238477 276% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8419740311 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.575757576 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0303030303 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78787878788 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 8.67935871743 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24252190431 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600047114974 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865327462959 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954350867911 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834063722799 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 293.0 78.4519038076 373% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: award-winning
... the Head of Projects, Kleos Africa, an award winning athlete and the Best Graduating Student...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Top
...ocial Sciences, Lagos State University. top 1% of 14,639 graduates. For a fact, ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, thus, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 10.4138276553 336% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 41.998997996 257% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 37.0 8.3376753507 444% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4408.0 1615.20841683 273% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 793.0 315.596192385 251% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55863808323 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.30662375533 4.20363070211 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23095035783 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 445.0 176.041082164 253% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561160151324 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1398.6 506.74238477 276% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8419740311 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.575757576 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0303030303 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78787878788 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 8.67935871743 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24252190431 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600047114974 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865327462959 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954350867911 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834063722799 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 293.0 78.4519038076 373% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.