It is true that television has played a vital role in human life. It has made human life much happier and entertained. but in some ways it also handle some drawbacks.
As we can see nowadays each person has television in their home. After working for long hours people feel tired and hectic. So television tends to remove all the stress by the number of its entertainment channels. It also make family relationship strong. After all the work done whole day . All the families sit together and watch television and enjoy.Moreover, not only entertainment but television also help to access knowledge . for example channels like discovery,wild life it provides knowledge about different breeds of animals also we can watch news about what is happening in the world. BBC,CHA are the most rated channel for accessing latest news.
For instance , Some believe television makes people lazy and people tends to feel sleepy all the time. but i believe its not the fault of television. people themself manage time for work and time for entertainment as well.
To conclude , i believe television has done many things to enhance. So it has more positive impact then drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uman life much happier and entertained. but in some ways it also handle some drawba...
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...enhance. So it has more positive impact then drawback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, after all, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04639175258 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77735993184 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6301327423 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1875 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.125 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199542348669 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618145505655 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432448807341 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11861186252 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438172528857 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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