Write a paragraph about the typical characteristics of Vietnamese people.
It is undeniable that the beauty of Vietnam comes not only from the stunning landscape but also from the typical characteristics of Vietnamese people. First of all, Vietnamese people are family-oriented. On important occasions, the Vietnamese often worship their ancestors in front of the family altar. Also, every member tries to come back home for family reunions, which helps to strengthen the family bonds. Secondly, the Vietnamese are hard-working. Besides handling domestic chores at home, the Vietnamese also spend many hours at their workplace and even take part-time jobs to support their family. Last but not least, Vietnamese people are patriotic. In the past, their national spirit was mainly shown through Vietnamese people’s solidarity to fight against foreign invaders. Even in modern society, it is still well preserved and promoted. For instance, when the Vietnamese football team won the AFF Cup in 2018, red national flags were hung all over the country. In conclusion, Vietnamese people possess a lot of characteristics that foreign visitors will find interesting to learn about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50588235294 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9430347071 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4916004576 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277579080358 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109063548388 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851776447134 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277579080358 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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