In the 18 century due to industrialization a lot of people migrated to developed countries. this affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. Discuss the problems and solutions.
Recently, the phenomenon of a lot of migration due to industrialization era and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that for the effects of these migrations was highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that changing lifestyle in developed countries by that can be a minus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss with lifestyle influenced by industrialization era. At first, the one advantage of this era was creating more job opportunities. However, this was the cause of rush the many people from poor countries to find a job. This migration made a conflict in culture among native people and those who were immigrants. For example, there were differences in many habits such as speech, language, wearing, and the others.
In addition, the other advantage of this era was increasing the sense of working to more income among people. But, the change in lifestyle for more work based on the low attention to personal life. For instance, a recent research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2010 on the major problems of changing the lifestyle after this period has shown that the meaning of family has changed in a significant number of developed countries.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that despite the benefits brought to developed countries after industrialization migrates, the drawbacks of the lifestyle-changing by that is far outweighed its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32950191571 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28323205819 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0266519776 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251271565803 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770060201938 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557058077601 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137328796598 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327562626458 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.