In this days, many young people would copy of celebrities in movie and sport. Although imitating of prosperous people is a good way to make future, imitation of superstars has no any profit. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why the copy of celebrities is bad.
To begin with, there are various reason to deny the copy of superstars. Firstly, Although mimicking of reputed scientists and inventors can flourish the talents of young people, the copy of superstars has bad effects on them. they represent to us luxury-oriented and modality. For example, the superstars always represent themselves by their appearances and their expensive clothes and cars.
Secondly, while the outside of celebrities life is attractive and charming, they may be involved with many problems. Many of superstars in movies are addicted which can be a dangerous pattern for youth. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2014 shows that a significant number of superstars addicted to alcohol and Marijuana.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about mimicking of famous people, my personal sentiment is that the effects of imitating celebrities in sport and movie are false behaves in young people and also damaging their personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33170731707 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98716668147 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.260924558 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174930721436 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693515450831 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624267122641 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107926850365 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681952580474 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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