The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developing countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of migration to the developed country and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of moving to another country due to industrialization is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the major problems of migrants in the developed countries can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, immigration to other countries can provide the society with some noticeable effects with are rooted in the fact that merits of cultural growth, as well as introducing the national tradition, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the influence of migrants on prevailing crime and civil vandalism. Thus, the negative ramifications of both antisocial behavior and the alien culture apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of migration legislations, migration to the developed countries might increase the consequences of job opportunities. Moreover, fundamental aspects of new lifestyle could relate to this reality that the demerits of the political refugees pertain to the illegal acts. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of migration to other countries due to industrialization is correlated negatively with lack of skilled workers. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of culture shock.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of accepting migrants in developed countries far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of cultural growth prove the significance of other civilization and language, but also pinpoint social implications.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67346938776 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34869430206 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9488627387 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147982185807 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526825070891 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051725601651 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876102666975 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631934686705 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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